Tuesday, October 16, 2012

The pool in G.I

On Sunday I went to the pool with my Dad, Nancy, Taiaha, Trinity and Kahurangi. We walked down to the pool. Once we got to the pool my Dad gave me and Taiaha my card to scan the card. Nancy moneyed for Trinity and Kahurangi. It was time, TO POT IN THE POOL’S!! We all had fun playing in the pool. Dad and Nancy was swimming. It was time to go home I like the pool’s. Do you like the pool’s.

1 comment:

  1. Hi Shanika,
    I really like your writing about going to the pools. I like going to the pools too. Even though your writing is amazing, you still need to watch out for "Punctuation" and spelling. Anyway, I am looking forward to your next post.

    By Lisia