Thursday, March 14, 2013

The car

On a Sunday morning Kim was tying her hair into a ponytail. She packed up her bags and hopped into the car to go to camp in the woods. Suddenly the car stopped in the middle of the trees. Smoke poured from the engine, Kim hopped out of the car. She ran back home because the car was on fire and she felt like it was going to blow up. While Kim was running home she forgot her bags in the car, and it was dark. Then she got home in the dark and had something to eat at home.

1 comment:

  1. Hello Shanika
    I really like the way you explained that Kim left her bag's in the car that was on fire. Keep up the amazing work.